I liked how you showed and didn't tell when explaining characters. I also liked how you used inner thinking at the right moments in scenes to make it more visual.
I really enjoyed your story because it had a lot of inner thinking in it! It also had a lot of description which made me really picture and understand the story better!
I liked how you showed and didn't tell when explaining characters. I also liked how you used inner thinking at the right moments in scenes to make it more visual.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story because it had a lot of inner thinking in it! It also had a lot of description which made me really picture and understand the story better!
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